Are any of these lyrics/ideas worth expanding on?

i think your lyrics are really good, it has a wierd meaning to it and i really like, i try to write too but not lyrics just poetry and from what i see i think this is better than the stuff i write and the lyrics also remind me of Incredible String band and especially Syd Barret's early stuff from Piper at the Gates of Dawn & Saucerful of Secrets wish you the best...